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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 29, 2023 2:18:22 GMT
Random comment but Su-Ah mentions a sun in our FTE and idk if that exists
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 29, 2023 2:48:29 GMT
Yugi circa chapter 2 trial:
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Post by Panda on Mar 29, 2023 9:17:04 GMT
Random comment but Su-Ah mentions a sun in our FTE and idk if that exists Nope, whoops. Everything's just sort of uniformly lit from outside the star system. Yugi circa chapter 2 trial: Oooh, nice! Kinda funny how Yugi's new look won't even last that long.
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Post by Panda on Mar 29, 2023 9:29:36 GMT
Chapter 2 activity:
After the festival was announced, you organised everyone participating into groups to prepare. You recalled Neuron's earlier 'prank' and thought this would be a good opportunity to set him up alone with someone.
Meanwhile, you'd had a brainwave. You weren't yet sure how you'd use Sissus's reward, but the idea appealed to you. Perhaps if you put on a special performance for him, you'd win his favour! The others generally didn't seem interested in it anyway, so you had a good chance.
Your activity was as otherwise described in the thread.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 29, 2023 13:24:59 GMT
Very scared during the whole post that at the end Su-Ah would be dead.
Still scared she’s the killer but I guess I should embrace the tragedy.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 29, 2023 15:12:46 GMT
Not sure if it’ll be a big twist but a telescope can be used for a spell’s line of sight probably? Perhaps?
That’s not a question it’s a theory.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 30, 2023 22:00:05 GMT
Some jerk stole my position as the most recent poster in Role PMs forum and I'm here to take it back
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Post by Panda on Mar 30, 2023 22:47:53 GMT
Try again when you've got RESULTS
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 4:05:30 GMT
That's fair. I want to dig into this mystery! I definitely like the concept, and I think you've successfully buried the lead for us. I really like how open-ended you've left these trials without just making certain prompts or anything like that. There's so many things to think about and it's so dynamic!
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 4:11:11 GMT
I think Neuron is a really fun character because I like these types of characters that are just like 20-30% a screwball. Like Neuron was pretty level but had a subtle edge to him and that really worked for his character arc. I'm also really curious about what he was hiding.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 4:17:24 GMT
Isadora: This was a really fun twist first death. I loved the weird meat prayer and general creepiness. Seems like the whole idea was to build up to the ritual, and so seh worked good for her role, but I wish she had been in the game a bit more. It would be great if she is somehow involved in a mystery, but I'm also satisfied if her only relevance was starting the game.
Kameron: Kameron was a great character for the story. The nostalgia we get from the pictures he took of us definitely hurts us. I think you did plenty of good stuff with him by having him start the explorers club and being an optimistic and mentorly presence. Obviously the death came as no shock, but that's okay. The character was solid.
Kenji: I love this freak. The backstory rules!!! That's the biggest thing I want to say. I think him having dreams about his job and having them immediately dashed really worked out. He was a first killer who was personally angry at his victim which is super cool, while also being a general jerk. Bruce was a great gag and all of his posts were funny. The intent was probably to keep him pretty background and minor and I think it worked great. Once the mystery was solved I said, "Ahh, all makes sense and is satisfying."
Neuron: Yeah, what I said above. There's still more I'll have to say once the trial is over, but this is a great victim character. Makes the trial totally intriguing.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 5:17:40 GMT
Really feels like we haven’t made it to the meat of the case yet. It’s pretty similar to last time so something about our interpretation of the murder method must be off. Why all the fuss about the broken window? Why the dents in the telescope? What were the weird noises?
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Post by Panda on Mar 31, 2023 9:32:36 GMT
Why indeed??
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 18:07:10 GMT
Okay so I did think that Felix Nico were likely earlier but I feel like I still want some better evidence and structure.
And I guess I’m confused about how I play a part in causing all this.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 18:08:10 GMT
Okay so I set someone up to be alone with Neuron. I’ll have to read the neuron scene back.
I’m starting to hint at it in the thread.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Mar 31, 2023 18:35:32 GMT
I love taunting everyone with this goofy scene knowledge I have. I think I had also pretty much forgotten about it until now so this all feels very in character.
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Post by Panda on Mar 31, 2023 18:37:30 GMT
Huh XD
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Post by Panda on Apr 1, 2023 22:25:18 GMT
Just so it's clear, Yugi has no idea what Sissus is talking about. He probably misread the situation and assumed Yugi set up the murder. Regardless of how she responds, he'll give her the credit and the reward.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 1, 2023 23:56:53 GMT
Okay that’s great! That’s what I thought
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 2, 2023 0:28:55 GMT
Let me know what I’m supposed to do.
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Post by Panda on Apr 2, 2023 0:30:33 GMT
Oh, sorry. Just like reveal Yugi's new form, have them introduce themselves e.t.c. You're in control now.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 2, 2023 0:39:26 GMT
Sounds good
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 3, 2023 3:54:27 GMT
Changing her name really changed the dynamic of this conversation. I wonder if they would be viewing her as such a different person.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 3, 2023 5:22:12 GMT
If I can use my new chapter request on the Nico FTE to make it extend into C3 that would be good.
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Post by Panda on Apr 3, 2023 9:51:50 GMT
Sure thing!
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 4, 2023 4:45:41 GMT
Here's Xhuli:
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Post by Panda on Apr 4, 2023 9:40:05 GMT
Ooooh, awesome! I'll update the cast image.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 4, 2023 14:54:25 GMT
Epic.
Also should I know my victim ahead of time?
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Post by Panda on Apr 4, 2023 16:08:09 GMT
I can tell you, but your plan doesn't involve knowing. You basically kill the first person you come across.
I'm not sure if I should change the cast image in the main post or not. Which one suits the game best, leaving her as Yugi or updating her to Xhuli? I guess that goes for the cast list too now that I think about it.
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Post by Doctor Nanjo M.D. on Apr 4, 2023 16:19:54 GMT
Up to you. You haven’t been doing the ol classic of crossing out characters as they die so the one in the OP is spoiler free. As such, Yugi changing to Xhuli makes less sense? But also it’s kinda cool if she does change everywhere throughout the world.
I talked myself into thinking it’s better if you change it.
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